My dns entries - are they correct ?

Applications IP Networking
1 
$ttl 38400
thedigitaldream.co.uk.	IN	SOA	digiserv. admin.thedigitaldream.co.uk. (
			1033481631
			10800
			3600
			604800
			38400 )
thedigitaldream.co.uk.	IN	NS	digiserv.
thedigitaldream.co.uk.	IN	A	81.97.225.82
www.thedigitaldream.co.uk.	IN	A	81.97.225.82
mail.thedigitaldream.co.uk.	IN	A	81.97.225.82
srv1.thedigitaldream.co.uk.	IN	NS	192.168.0.1
srv2.thedigitaldream.co.uk.	IN	NS	192.168.0.2
thedigitaldream.co.uk.	IN	NS	srv1.thedigitaldream.co.uk
thedigitaldream.co.uk.	IN	NS	srv2.thedigitaldream.co.uk
mail.thedigitaldream.co.uk.	IN	MX	1 thedigitaldream.co.uk

i followed all of that from a tutorial. And where i have used that ip addresses of 192.168.0.1 and 192.168.0.2 are those meant to be internal ips or external ips??

anyway, tell me if it looks sensible

thanx

2

Sorry I don't have more time to answer.

Seems like you have a few problem or unresolved issued in your configuration. For example 192.168.0.0 address space is not routable over the Internet so how will people access these names servers?.. etc.